So, I'm writing a short story.
As you wish, but political or drama stuff is not designed for the humorous tone you had in the prologue. I more imagine how this guy gets into a weird place with crazy stuff some isolated island. You can also slowly reveal what happened to him prior to the crash, where was he heading and why.
They're watching ... 
"I am forbidden tag" -CvN
"I am forbidden tag" -CvN
Re: So, I'm writing a short story.
I don't think it's terrible, and Tiel's OK with it, so you're good. It's been discussed already, albeit briefly.Tau wrote:On another note relating to politics, is the new imaged in my sig's spoiler too... risque? Or offensive?
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(Kzinti script, as best as can be displayed in Human characters, translated roughly as "For the Patriarchy!")
(Kzinti script, as best as can be displayed in Human characters, translated roughly as "For the Patriarchy!")