Outpost 19

[joykler]

Name:xong
Species:xenogryd
Age:20
Backstory: owning of a slavery empire
mass executions
fraud
bribing of officers [tried to bribe the judge while in court]
Traits:xenogryd traits
very stupid but can sense things coming
very strong
tough skin,the insect [xenogroth] that allows it to live also protects it by cocooning it in a kind of armor
the insect sucks in dust of the walls [including metal] and uses it in its cocoons effect his armor is as strong as the walls but he has alot of weaknesses
needs to stay at 20 degrees any above or below that temprature will kil him
he needs oxygen at 4 times normal pressure if he doesnt have his air tank on or if its defect he will die
well all poisons in food will kil him because his immune structure is very unstable

Personality: just smart enough to know not to pee in the kitchen
spoiled brat
caring
scared all the time
doesnt know its own strength
Role: prisoner

[Crash Override]

Light speed seems a little OP to me.

He won't get weapons, and telepathic powers will only affect those of his same race due to physical differences in neural systems, and won't affect machines

OOC: Im the equivalent of a classical rpg Rogue or Ranger. Agile,stealthy,this sort of thing.

[joykler]

im the one equivalent of to the
snorlax ! tuff shell
strong as hell
but cant do shit

[Vinyl]

Notice 092853: Please refrain from swearing, cursing, cussing, and any other terminology for inappropriate words.

[Professor Fenway]

Joykler is not accepted. Too all-over the place, inconsistent, etc. Come up with something else.

[joykler]

sorry since when did you get control of that

and im not all over the place
he is just very simple
he exists of two parts
the insect
and the goo

they work together in simbiosis
the insect is almost indistructible and creates the movement
he lives of the electro pulses the goo emits
these pulses also controll most movement of the insect
because the insect also has all muscles he is very strong [he can lift alot]
the insect can notice very large changes in his eviroment [if something big would be coming his way he would sense something and he has still little control over his own body]

the goo is the brain
he is the weak part
he is not very smart
and very easely hurt
but because of the armor the insect makes not by claws or bullits, because he needs to eat and drink and breath he is still weak.

he is a third generation slave owner who never really attended the slaving
but he is sentenced because he is the boss
so he is stupid
caring
and a spoiled brat
thats not all over the place
or op
or too much
he would be a very simple one
others would tell him to lift things
but thats all

and why does everyone hate me

[ACH0225]

Fenway RP forum moderator. He has the power to do that in any RP.

Slavery generally isn't a bad offense under corrupt governments, and wouldn't warrant the Outpost. Neither would fraud, bribery, or killing a few people. So you're probably going to have to think of a better character, like a standard human or something. As for why people hate you, I'd guess because the grammar is bad.

[joykler]

slavery is bad
my whole nation was attacked because it used slaves
and everyone is against slaving especcialy fenway
i use this race for almost all rps i have playd in
my grammar is improving but never will be good enough

[҉]

my grammar is improving but never will be good enough

At this rate, no, it never will be. I'm not certain it's actually improving.

[ACH0225]

This is an incredibly corrupt space nation. Most people either own slaves or are slaves. That's what makes this RP unique- the big nation is corrupt beyond repair, and their laws are basically defunct.

[joykler]

so all i have to do is make a new persona that has to do worse things than mass executions

[Professor Fenway]

Not necessarily. Joykler, you never mentioned anything about goo. At all. Also, your environment restrictions are extreme. 20 degrees of what? Fahrenheit? Celsius? Kelvin? How could he be caring AND own a slavery empire? You make him out to be like a dog, no, a rat. No intelligence, yet somehow managed a slavery empire. A shell, so to speak. How in any capacity would he survive? Especially in the prison.

It is also very, very hard to understand you at times.

Denied until further notice.

[Prototype]

I gave Fenway specific permission to accept/decline stuff
Also please don't derail this before it starts, if you get rejected, come up with a better entry.

[joykler]

if you get rejected, come up with a better entry.

then i need to know what to change

i only mentioned my race and my crime
and the fact he is spoiled

[Prototype]

if you get rejected, come up with a better entry.

then i need to know what to change

i only mentioned my race and my crime
and the fact he is spoiled

It was a bit extreme, I mean nobody else in here was in for anything that bad, I mean Theta almost destroyed an entire world, but failed. Also caring and slave owners do not mix.

You could say that he was involved in the slavery industry, perhaps as one of the shippers who was caught, and arrested for being part of a larger slavery ring.

That's just a suggestion that might work, just bear in mind you faction here doesn't have to exactly mirror your faction in other RPs, here you would have been destroyed for slavery by the corrupt UGF