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The NeoRoman War
Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2014 5:29 pm
by Professor Fenway
I made this. I'm doing this as a series.
I need a better video recorder because this one is shiite, so apologies about the quality.
Re: The NeoRoman War
Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2014 5:44 pm
by Error
"Set, on revenge" is grammatically bad. "Dead set on revenge" or "Eager for revenge" or similar would be better.
/grammarnazi
Could definitely be interesting.
+1 for LLL.
Re: The NeoRoman War
Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2014 5:47 pm
by Professor Fenway
I'm going to be redoing this at some point, this was more of an exercise than a serious commitment.
Re: The NeoRoman War
Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2014 6:39 pm
by Vinyl
Looks like it could be really good at some point.
By some point, I mean when the Hexalani Coalition fleets warp in and rekts everyone else.