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So going back to Fenways Uber official RP. What went wrong, and why hasn't a new one been started. So, What Crashed The Server?

We made new better RPs, I always found smaller scale RPs better.

And I somehow enjoyed them less O.o , it is either just following the GM's storyline while you feel out of place or if the GM is generous you all try to write together a crappy story. I suggested writing a story together but I ended up writing it myself with nobody reading -.-

On that part, I have good news: once "The Virus" is finished, the second chapter will have NO storyline. (well, theralmost none, there will be some wildcards, but in fact, even the ending is going to be variable, depending on the player´s actions)

Iv121 wrote:And I somehow enjoyed them less O.o , it is either just following the GM's storyline while you feel out of place or if the GM is generous you all try to write together a crappy story. I suggested writing a story together but I ended up writing it myself with nobody reading -.-

Well, at least you acknowledge it. To go a little offtopic here, I admire the effort you put into it but the language errors and lack of proper formatting prevented me personally from investing any time into reading it. I strongly disbelieve anyone who rated the story did so, either.

Overall the spelling is not that bad ... I felt more like the story itself is dry as the colorful scenes and distant worlds become a blurred mark on an empty canvas, just because it is almost impossible to describe it, too many details and not enough words ( I mean literally - English has so much less words than so many other languages, often mixing so many meanings in one word). I didn't quit so far because I still felt that a few, maybe 2 or 3 read it but the more I read it the more disgusted I am by my own work. I read so much stuff about that writing and really broke almost any rule concerning that. I would have set down and redo it all but from what I read I better say my inner critic to shut the hell up and let me finish the story as terrible as it is then redo it later. I guess I will finish the chapter I began two weeks ago and maybe keep reading before I write again.

It is really frustrating though that nobody bothers to read what I do. I am ready to accept criticism, actually I want to get as much of it as possible as I know the story is bad, just let there be any criticism. I will never improve if nobody will help me , yet as much as I am angry nobody reads it I know I can't force you to do it. So here you go if you wondered why I didn't write for the last two weeks ...