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Galactic Republic

Post by CT 1010 » Sat Jan 05, 2013 9:04 am

Faction: Galactic Republic
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Homeworld: Sanbonkaru
Government: Republic
Army: Grand Army of the Republic
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All of great civilizations once face their end. And this story, about one of the greatest loses in our galaxy… But all have the other side. In our story – bright one...
It all started many light years before humans raised their heads to the sky. In the farthest corner of a Miny Way galaxy. It all started from planet Sanbonkaru, where lived civilization about which will be this story.

Wise aliens called themselves Advents
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, they were rulers of Galaxy. There weren’t any species who wasn’t in a control of Advents. But one day, they realized that their race is slowly disappearing from face of the Galaxy. But when they started to solve this problem, it was too late. In Miny Way, there left only few well protected colonies of Advent, I would say fortresses. All scientist started to solve this problem. And one day, maybe the wisest council of Advent called Zangerys,
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said that they will start a cloning facility, with it power they will restore population of Advent and their mighty. It was very wise, but also risky, because it was unknown technology, and Advent needed to study it, with live and smart species. They chosen humans. Why humans? Well at that time they were the weakest species and Advents could make a raid on a planet. We know it as a story from Bible. The story about fire of God. So, after all test, anatomy cuts, from 1000 people, survived 18 of them. And now they were brought to cloning machine, where it supposed to take DNA from them. Machine supposed to destroy all human bodies, to achieve their pure DNA.

After 3 day extraction process, DNA was successfully achieved, and started cloning process. Now from all 18 examples, only one bank had unmutated clone.
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But then, Zangerys was destroyed by Sandoseruty – emergency military defense council. And now clone project was in their hands. And they decided not to save their species and continue clone project, but to create their own army, and now appeared new project known as MClone – 2. It was divided into two parts. 1 – growing process, and second – educative. At that time it was only in first part. Sandoseruty forced Zangerys to create growing booster. After 4 long years clone army was created,
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Advents had 2 last colonies. Situation was critical. But then Sandoseruty started to capture more and more planets. Advent Empire started returning. All species were in shock, because they didn’t even imagine that Advents could created such big army, and they weren’t prepared for sudden attack. More then 10 years Advent Empire was invincible. But then, seed of rebellion dropped into hurts of clones, and they started to rebel. First there were small flashes, but then it grew stronger.

Advents started to lose their power. And so, the Great Clone Advent War has started. Clones now finally became free, but they were forced to defend their freedom. They have divided into 6 tribes
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. Who were led by 6 chiefs. After 2 years Advent started to lose battle by battle, war was seemed to start ending. But suddenly one chief betrayed other tribes,
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and in final battle with Advents, his tribe attacked from the back. Other tribes weren’t prepared for such betrayal and couldn’t stand from those two enemies… At that battle chiefs of green,red,orange and white tribes fallen. But death also took yellow traitor. Now there was only one chief left – blue one.
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After battle Clone Army started to retreat, and Advents were on top of their triumph. But then, suddenly was large explosion. Shocked clones and Advents raised their heads…. In the sky there were fleets of United Terran Navy… Finally the war has ended…
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Re: Galactic Rupablic

Post by Prototype » Sat Jan 05, 2013 10:11 am

Bit unoriginal but good nonetheless.

Just be warned there we a few other Star Wars oriented factions on here already, but I don't think you conflict with any of them.
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Re: Galactic Repablic

Post by CT 1010 » Sat Jan 05, 2013 10:44 am

:D
Thanks for warning, but it is not like about Star Wars , it's about clones
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Re: Galactic Republic

Post by Ivan2006 » Sat Jan 05, 2013 2:56 pm

Sorry, but noone is gonna believe you that you aren´t inspired by Clone Wars...
Not after naming your faction "Galactic Republic"
And not it has to fit in an already crowded galaxy, so not that "galactic", I guess?
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Re: Galactic Republic

Post by Prototype » Sat Jan 05, 2013 3:00 pm

Ivan2006 wrote:Sorry, but noone is gonna believe you that you aren´t inspired by Clone Wars...
Not after naming your faction "Galactic Republic"
And not it has to fit in an already crowded galaxy, so not that "galactic", I guess?
Clone wars is star wars, but inferior.

but it is kinda OP though.

my advice is make something origional, an origional faction will attract more merit than something already in a franchise, not slamming unorigional factions
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Re: Galactic Republic

Post by Ivan2006 » Sat Jan 05, 2013 3:41 pm

Prototype wrote:
Ivan2006 wrote:Sorry, but noone is gonna believe you that you aren´t inspired by Clone Wars...
Not after naming your faction "Galactic Republic"
And not it has to fit in an already crowded galaxy, so not that "galactic", I guess?
Clone wars is star wars, but inferior.

but it is kinda OP though.

my advice is make something origional, an origional faction will attract more merit than something already in a franchise, not slamming unorigional factions
Oh, and if you happen to really want to choose a franchise, choose one that hasn´t been chosen by other community menbery yet.
Helped me avoid getting called unoriginal...
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Re: Galactic Republic

Post by Prototype » Sat Jan 05, 2013 3:46 pm

Ivan, you don't get called unoriginal because you actually made a decent effort to build upon an existing franchise (or at least made it more convincing)

And if you want another franchise, don't do 40k, that's been done to death.
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Re: Galactic Republic

Post by cats » Sat Jan 05, 2013 5:14 pm

Prototype wrote:Ivan, you don't get called unoriginal because you actually made a decent effort to build upon an existing franchise (or at least made it more convincing)

And if you want another franchise, don't do 40k, that's been done to death.
Yes you do, that's the definition of unoriginal.
Don't do it because it's HUGELY boring and doesn't leave anything to discover. It shows a lack of creativity. Not meaning to insult CT, the only unoriginal thing about this is the name and its implications, also some pictures and the general plot of history. I would, however, avoid things like "rulers of the galaxy" and "Galactic ____."
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Re: Galactic Republic

Post by  ҉  » Sat Jan 05, 2013 8:39 pm

Every picture that you've labeled 'Advent' is a Vasari. :|
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Re: Galactic Republic

Post by cats » Sat Jan 05, 2013 8:42 pm

Last_Jedi_Standing wrote:Every picture that you've labeled 'Advent' is a Vasari. :|
Anything that LJS can say that about is not original enough.
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Re: Galactic Republic

Post by Tunnelthunder » Sat Jan 05, 2013 9:11 pm

SO MANY ERRORS! Its one thing to make a small post but a massive wall of text with errors through out!

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Re: Galactic Republic

Post by CT 1010 » Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:34 am

Last_Jedi_Standing wrote:Every picture that you've labeled 'Advent' is a Vasari. :|
I know. But if i would name that race Vasari it would be like in Sins. And now its a bit original.
Oh, and could you show me some star wars factions,couz I thought there are non
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Re: Galactic Republic

Post by ACH0225 » Sun Jan 06, 2013 7:52 am

There is a person here called "Last Jedi Standing".

What kind of faction do you think he would use?
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Re: Galactic Republic

Post by Chairman_Tiel » Sun Jan 06, 2013 9:38 am

Alduin has the Dovan Empire, LJS has...well, no one really knows.
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Re: Galactic Republic

Post by Alduin » Sun Jan 06, 2013 9:59 am

Tiel wrote:Alduin has the Dovan Empire, LJS has...well, no one really knows.
LJS has Last_Jedi_Standing Industries
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