Redesigning the Batii

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Redesigning the Batii

Post by cats » Fri May 30, 2014 8:03 pm

I've been meaning to give the Feles race a new name and face for a while so they're not so obviously feline. Batii is the name for any citizen of the Batiss Combine, so I'll be using that until I can reassign a race name. So far, I have one attempt at a visual redesign, but several people have told me that it's slightly horrifying.
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Re: Redesigning the Batii

Post by Error » Fri May 30, 2014 8:05 pm

I wouldn't say horrifying. More just alien, which I assume is the idea here.

Not sure about the ears - cats' ears tend not to extend as far down the head as those, but again, alien. Looks good, mate.
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Re: Redesigning the Batii

Post by  ҉  » Fri May 30, 2014 8:26 pm

IMO it would be better if it didn't have a human mouth/nose. It looks weird because it's a totally normal lower face with a totally alien upper face. If the mouth was either more carnivore or something like a turian's it might look better.
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Re: Redesigning the Batii

Post by ACH0225 » Fri May 30, 2014 8:38 pm

Give it Halo Sangheili mouth.
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Re: Redesigning the Batii

Post by Shadowcatbot » Fri May 30, 2014 8:51 pm

Looks like a ugly gremlin.
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Re: Redesigning the Batii

Post by  ҉  » Fri May 30, 2014 9:28 pm

ACH0225 wrote:Give it Halo Sangheili mouth.
Perhaps just the lower two mandibles, not all four? The structure of the whole head is wrong for that to work exactly the way it does for a Sangheili, but two (or maybe three) replacing the lower jaw might look OK.
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