You missed a comma there.Chairman Tiel wrote:Would you like some feedback?
I realize not everyone's looking for critique so from now on I'll ask beforehand.
0/10 get ready for summer school.
You missed a comma there.Chairman Tiel wrote:Would you like some feedback?
I realize not everyone's looking for critique so from now on I'll ask beforehand.
The comma in Tiel's sentence was optional. The comma in yours, however, was not. Try again.CMA wrote:You missed a comma there.Chairman Tiel wrote:Would you like some feedback?
I realize not everyone's looking for critique so from now on I'll ask beforehand.
0/10 get ready for summer school.
That was intentional, actually. It implies a hurried engrish-like tone that is part of the mene. Of course, you could be talking about something other than after 0/10.Kzin wrote:The comma in Tiel's sentence was optional. The comma in yours, however, was not. Try again.CMA wrote:You missed a comma there.Chairman Tiel wrote:Would you like some feedback?
I realize not everyone's looking for critique so from now on I'll ask beforehand.
0/10 get ready for summer school.
You really don't like CMA, do you lolKzin wrote:The comma in Tiel's sentence was optional. The comma in yours, however, was not. Try again.CMA wrote:You missed a comma there.Chairman Tiel wrote:Would you like some feedback?
I realize not everyone's looking for critique so from now on I'll ask beforehand.
0/10 get ready for summer school.
First my semi-amusing story snippets, now my cliches. STOP STEALING MY IDENTITY YOU FIEND!catsonmeth wrote:Just so everyone knows, I have something in the works. Don't rip up your panties just yet, though, it probably won't be very impressive. Lots of stuff going on. Big stuff.
BIIIG stuff.Chairman Tiel wrote:STOP STEALING MY IDENTITY YOU FIEND!
Are you referring to me as 'it'?Chairman Tiel wrote:You really don't like CMA, do you lolKzin wrote: The comma in Tiel's sentence was optional. The comma in yours, however, was not. Try again.
I mean, I could've said the same a few months back, but since I don't really have the wit or willpower you do to actually attack it, I have to say it's surprisingly easy to get accustomed to it after a while. Sure, a more often that not it they aren't the funniest things in the world, yet at the same time it isn't the rage-inducing drivel it is on initial exposure.
I'm not going to tell you what to do, nor am I going to imply you're wrong (because I can totally see where you're coming from), but I'm just saying it might help to read it less literally. The name of the game is everything CMA says is probably BS, unless it isn't, in which case it probably is anyway.
I thought something like that, it's fine.Chairman Tiel wrote:Not so much you as the manner in which you post. Sorry if that wasn't clear, I can't grammar at midnight.